Monday, October 20, 2008

Dialogue One-Pass

Here's my one-pass. I totally forgot to make her do something during the long pause after she says "they're dead". Plus, I'm wondering if I should cut out the last part where she stabs the knife in the table because she's not even stabbing the bear which makes it kind of pointless.

Sorry for the line-shimmery thing. I think it's because I applied a contrast on the light lines. Maybe I should just not apply contrast at all. Will try to upload a better quality version by tonight. Must finish Kaveh's lighting project first. :[


1 comment:

Ghost23 said...

It looks pretty good, but the still frame on the pause, felt like it didn't work, maybe have her like blink or some sort of minor movement.