I will need to add a big sigh for him after the second person walks past. He gets frustrated because no one would pay him any attention so he goes to the alley and plays with his fish. But he eventually becomes very hungry and hesitates about eating the fish. I need to rework the timing here with the hesitation. As for the last scene of him eating the fish, I'm not finished with it, that's why it's still animatics. Again, must rework the timing to suit the hesitation. I also cut out the scene where the fish willingly be grabbed since it felt disconnected.
Meanwhile, my particles is rendering so incredibly slowly. Took all day just to render the water blast for the first two seconds of my film! And I haven't even started on the fire yet. I think I'll just turn in 1 picture for Kaveh... >_>"
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Wow, nice work! :3 Like you said, just gotta do the timing and such for the last part. I love the legs passing by and the look he gives them. For the part where he's hungry, I can't wait to see his expression. I think it should go from sad to pain maybe. That end part is gonna be critical.
Also, let's hope Kaveh gets renderfarm this week. *crosses fingers*
Sick! I can see a lot of effort in this final unlike mines haha! Keep it up!
omg!! ''please donait" !!! >.< that's too ridiculously cute!!! garrr - you anger me!! ...now i feel for him too much!! ... i want to feed the kid :( .... why'd you have to make such a sad story? >.< .....
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