Dialogue Final Pass

I've tried my best to perfect it and I have nothing more to add to my animation so I guess this is it. Will try my best for the next one.

Dialogue One-Pass

Here's my one-pass. I totally forgot to make her do something during the long pause after she says "they're dead". Plus, I'm wondering if I should cut out the last part where she stabs the knife in the table because she's not even stabbing the bear which makes it kind of pointless.

Sorry for the line-shimmery thing. I think it's because I applied a contrast on the light lines. Maybe I should just not apply contrast at all. Will try to upload a better quality version by tonight. Must finish Kaveh's lighting project first. :[

Dialogue Keys

Here's my dialogue key animation. If you're wondering about the first and second frame where her body goes lower, I was gonna make her pant or breathe hard but after putting the keys next to the audio, I realize how short the initial few seconds of silence is so I think I'll just make her stand there instead. Rather I should be thinking of what to make her do after she says "dead" in that long time frame.

Also, instead of killing a cat, I decided to do a teddy bear because this way it makes the girl more insane. Haha~

Portraits from Wednesday

Why is it that every time I add eyes and mouths, it ruins the picture!? Well, the second one has sunglasses. But they don't look as cool as the real thing. Here, they look like aliens. :[ I will post my dialogue animation keys tomorrow.

Dialogue Animation Thumbnails

I chose the "Dead" one from the sound clips page. I'm in the mood for Halloween. So basically this maniac killer killed her own parents and is now set out to kill the cat. The cat is seen hissing at her for the entirety of the animation. In the second frame, the girl tilts her head and jabs her thumb behind her saying that "they're dead". And then she hunches down at the cat and points saying that the cat is gonna be next. Then the cat jumps away and the crazy maniac lunges after it. Click for a larger image.

Catching Up

11 Second Club Vote

The above is what I picked for #1 because I thought it worked really well where the lady is a maniac and admitted her crimes and then went on to kill the inspector as well. The timing was good.



As a side note, I thought the one pictured above had a really great opening scene that panned in on the interrogation. I thought it was composed really well with dark colors.